tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6778303853789096034.post7252073633566453521..comments2023-11-05T00:53:11.293-07:00Comments on CWATIC: Last Grain of HopeQuwwahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07775107972048465492noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6778303853789096034.post-79634877705227724282010-04-18T23:29:40.719-07:002010-04-18T23:29:40.719-07:00Hello.
Thanks for the comment on my blog,I just le...Hello.<br />Thanks for the comment on my blog,I just left you a comment there as well.I'm sorry to of really been missing in action here on Blogger,but I have a new blog that has been getting a lot of feedback lately.At any rate,it is always wonderful to visit here and read your newest pieces of poetry.<br /><br />In this particular poem,I like many elements.The extension of the lines leave space for the best rhythm,and the simplicity of the language is also used effectively.I seem to have difficulty with the beginnings of poems,but right away with your two opening lines,the reader is grounded in the possibilities that the poem later fully realizes.The topic of reflection is always an interesting one,and you seem to weigh a powerful balance between past and current time.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing,hope to read more soon.<br /><br />Much love,<br />MelissaMelissa Barrett-Traisterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03160981180142033454noreply@blogger.com